Share Happiness Among People Using Free Hugs
Free hugs campaign is an activity that offer hugs to everyone in public place. At
the beginning, the people just ignored that guy and they just slipped by around
him. Some of them might have a lot of questions about what is he doing. They
might think he was unique, strange, odd, or just wanted to create a sensation, or
even worse they thought that guy was crazy. But, one of them captured a photo
of that guy. Then, that situation changed when an old woman was passing in
front of him and suddenly she hug that guy. It followed by another people
who wanted to get a free hug. Next, the police banned free hugs, some of police
just give them a reprimand or even worse they maybe got ticketed. After the
police banned this activity, people who struggled for free hugs doing campaign
by way of getting signature of everyone. Maybe they did that because they wanted to
make free hugs allowed anymore. After that, total signature that they were
looking for were 10.000 signatures and it was their target in this free hugs
campaign. At the end, free hugs allowed again by the police and they invited
everyone who wanted to get free hugs, including the police. The main point are they want to share happiness among the people with their differences and this is the real form or the real action in sharing happiness
to the world.
wisnu, ur writting is gud
ReplyDeletebut my comment : it is better to explain what is called by free hugs campaign at the first. u directly go to the video's content. consider people who don't have a chance to watch it yet.
Thank you for your comment, i will done it
Deletei think there are some mistakes with the grammar , because in your paragraph the tenses that you used is not consistence
ReplyDeletefor example (a lot of question) a lot of questions
(people who want to) wanted to
(of get signature ) of getting
(they are looking for ) was looking . . .
Thank's for your input.
DeleteWell, i will fix it
cma2 :D
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