The Great Revolution of my Life
A
revolution in human life consists of two kinds, such as good revolution and bad
revolution. Revolution or we can say it as turning point of life, certainly happens to everyone in this world, including me. It happened during
my study in college at the third semester. My turning point was when I was a
lazy person in study became diligent in study. It started with my failure in
second semester, I learned from failure and then I achieved a great result.
My
failure in second semester made me felt sorrow. At second semester, I rarely
went to hometown and made me felt homesick. It made my motivation to study
decrease. Indirectly, I was full with laziness in studying, so I almost spent
my free time to play game. Finally, I impacted into my final exam and I got the
lowest GPA in class. I felt shame at that time.
I
learned from failure to be better than before. Because I felt ashamed, then I
studied diligently. I created principle for myself which I wanted to run away
from my safe zone. So, it motivated myself in studying and learning. The main
problem of me was I was difficult to find my own style in studying. Day by day
I studied, I finally found my own style in study.
In
the end, great result for my hard work had been paid. I could enjoy my
satisfied result. My GPA was one of the highest one in class. It also followed
by another successful achievement which I elected to be the captain of my
class. Then, I believed that every hard work that we did will be paid by good
result.
Indeed,
the great result of something happened because of our hard work. I felt that
because my first failure became my motivation. It turned myself from being lazy
in study became diligent in study.
Wow. It is a good experience, Wisnu. :)
ReplyDeleteYou have changed your behavior to be better and better.
You can motivate your self, although I know that it is so hard to "move on" when you are down. :)
I also really love your writing. It is so inspiring. I think you have good grammar enough.
However, I think there is something wrong with the second sentence in the first paragraph.
You wrote, "Revolution in my life or we can say it as turning point of life, certainly happens to everyone in this world, including me."
I think it does not organize well. Maybe it is better if you write, "Revolution or we can say it as turning point of life, certainly happens to everyone in this world, including me."
Thank you Wisnu. You have done a good job. Keep writing :)
Wow, I didn't know you got the lowest GPA in our class in the 2nd semester.
ReplyDeleteBut great job WIsnu, you really learn from your failure and made it as your big motivation in achieving good result. Keep it up!!
From zero to hero,
ReplyDeleteVery good my bro ^^ keep it up
no pain no gain wisnu and the most important thing is you can improve your self and make prove your self,,,,
ReplyDeletehi Wisnu
ReplyDeletegood writing. good thesis statement and good concluding paragraph.
maybe you can write longer than this and put more explanation to emphasize feelings so the readers can feel it as well . ;)
@Widya thanks widya for your comment, i will revise it :D
ReplyDelete@Aristiya thanks aris, of course i will
@Adi Kerta thanks a lot gan
@Ayu Padmi yeah it's true, thanks so much
@Candra, okay candra, i will do that